Nowadays, people are widely holding divergent opinions in the growing popularity of the commercial industry enables it to beneficially affect our daily lives. This essay solely agrees with the above statement. This essay will first give some plausible explanations and demonstrate relevant examples.
First of all, the growth of advertising plays a crucial role in the development of the national economy. This is because of watching TV or online commercial, the viewers hugely contribute to the gross domestic product (GDP) of their countries. Moreover, the government also gives financial resources to many commercial companies to support their revenue because advertising is an important source to attract international investment. For example, it is recorded that Vietnam has witnessed a significant increase of roughly 65% in the total incomes since 2018 due to the expansion of advertisements nationally.
From another perspective, advertising makes a great contribution to the reduction of the unemployment rate worldwide. Thanks to the huge promotion of the commercial industry, many unemployed citizens are offered tons of job opportunities to enter the laboring market, and therefore, greatly benefit society. For instance, many international companies such as Facebook, Microsoft, or Nike recruit graphic designers in order to design their website for products introduction purposes. Furthermore, the Japanese government has recently reported that over 89% of its citizens are recruited by many co-operations worldwide due to the extensive development of the advertisement.
In conclusion, the extension of advertising generally has beneficial impacts not only on the national incomes but also on the decrease in the proportion of unemployed workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86434108527 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27054851529 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0860112608 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0919356261488 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350131092283 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261424433077 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524364485206 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232048830938 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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