Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
To be a movie star is not for everyone you must to face all the positive and negative points no matter what is your mood is. Being famous, rich, well connected must be a wonderful way of living however, everyone wants to know about your privacy, what is your dirty little secret, who are you dating with and so on.
Being honest seeing yourself at the top trends everywhere must be very special for the ego itself. Additionally you have lots of meaningful invitations daily such as TV shows, lectures, advertisement, parties and so on. Nevertheless a celebrity earns a good money for all these expousure. The image worth a high amount so, putting your mind as a worry less mode would be priceless, unfortunately I am not able to say that trully.
Furthermore there are some relevants inconvenience in being a well recognized person, people could be mad at you, jealous, courious in a bad way such the Paparazzis does. It is often said that not a few celebrities goes crazy and start to be unpolite with lots of fans just because they gets confused who is well intentioned and who is not. Could you imagine yourself struggling against your own fan club? Not keen on that at all.
Given these points, to be at the stage, walk in the red carpet or even hold some golden award is not for simple person. It is necessary to be prepared, to be strong when your are not and be kind when you are nuts. It does not matter what is your temper sometimes is, indeed most of the people, fans and social media do not care, they just wants to look at the most famous person they have ever meet take a selfie and try to discovery something about that celebrity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...be a movie star is not for everyone you must to face all the positive and negative poin...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t, who are you dating with and so on. Being honest seeing yourself at the top ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ust be very special for the ego itself. Additionally you have lots of meaningful invitations...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...ures, advertisement, parties and so on. Nevertheless a celebrity earns a good money for all ...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good money'.
Suggestion: good money
...d so on. Nevertheless a celebrity earns a good money for all these expousure. The image wort...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ly I am not able to say that trully. Furthermore there are some relevants inconvenience ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... could be mad at you, jealous, courious in a bad way such the Paparazzis does. It is often s...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...ite with lots of fans just because they gets confused who is well intentioned and wh...
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Line 7, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...scovery something about that celebrity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, nevertheless, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50166112957 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49826818307 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.607938309 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219706374932 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785992881958 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483227206283 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139384254821 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174050509631 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.