Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post,TV,internet...)to study at home. But some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. Do you agree or disagree?
Many student prefer to choose remote education rather than traditional. Some people tend to outline that online education cannot be as useful as traditional. This essay disagrees with this statement and argues that online education provides a better price value and students can join to the best learning courses from almost all parts of the world.
Distance-learning programs cost less than attending a classes in real life. This is due to low expanses that need to conduct online courses. Online learning programs do not pay rent and taxes that’s why their courses more affordable. For example, One of the best Universities in the whole world. Berkeley offers online Business management courses for 2.300 Dollars, while offline courses cost more than 12.200 Dollars
Due to online educational students from any countries can watch video lectures that offered by the best Universities in the world or even join to their online courses. This is because Universities offer wide variety of courses to teach more students. For example in YouTube everyone can find videos from the Harvard
In Conclusion, Distance learning programs bring more benefit than traditional education, because of it costs less and everyone can use it from parts of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many students'.
Suggestion: Many students
Many student prefer to choose remote education rathe...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a class', 'a classis' or simply 'classes'?
Suggestion: a class; a classis; classes
...rning programs cost less than attending a classes in real life. This is due to low expans...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne courses cost more than 12.200 Dollars Due to online educational students from ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...veryone can find videos from the Harvard In Conclusion, Distance learning program...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67065535028 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6103085936 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11425250092 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544146916002 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465517412311 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778090203948 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355429483924 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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