write a letter to the director of a institution where you joined a evening course.
-> why you joined the course
-> what problem you are facing
-> what action you want to be taken
Dear Sir,
I am Umanga Bulumulla, a student from the Hotel Management course started month ago. The institute is doing a great job by facilitating evening classes for the students who has interest in doing these courses but unable to do them in day time. I always loved cooking and the environment having in hotels, so decided to start my carrier path through your organization because this institute gives the best techniques and practices in hotel managements.
Although this is my comfort zone, I have found the practical sessions a bit shorter. It is always 1 hour schedule to a practical period but sometimes it is not enough to grab all the necessary information in that time frame. And also these are evening classes, lecturers trying to finish it quickly.
I am requesting you to take this letter as a suggestion but not as a complain. This issue can be address by increasing the practical sessions or reducing theoretical lessons for a day. Another option would be weekend classes for the practical lectures. Really appreciate if you can look in to this as soon as possible. I would like to hear from you with a positive manner.
Yours faithfully,
Umanga Bulumulla
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Thanks a lot for the
Thanks a lot for the evaluations given. This is helpful for me to improve in my writing side in IELTS. I always end up with 6.5 band for writing. What do you think I am lacking for this? Is it grammar?
If you have grammar issues,
If you have grammar issues, for sure you can't get a good mark. So first of all, try to remove all grammatical issues. and then, let's see if you have other issues. You will need to submit more essays not only task I, but task II also.
Thanks a lot for the advice.
Thanks a lot for the advice. I will send more essays and letters soon.
students who has interest
students who have interest
lecturers trying to finish it quickly.
lecturers are trying to finish it quickly.
This issue can be address by
This issue can be addressed by
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 201 200
No. of Characters: 952 1000
No. of Different Words: 131 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.736 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.744 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.563 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.606 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4