Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain:
• what are the changes
• what are the problems you are facing
• what part of the service would you like to change
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to request you for the alteration of the change which you have recently made in the route of the bus which was running from my city Bus no PB 110987V.
I have been travelling by this bus from last five years along with my four other colleagues. But last week when we were waiting for the bus we came to know that route of the bus has been change and know it will be travelling to Ludhiana via Mullapur which is another town in the near by area.
Because of this change we are facing many problems firstly we have to move to near by town from our village on our own vehicles. There is parking problem for the whole day but this bus reaches Ludhiana at 9:15 am and till the time we reach the college it was around 9:40, because of which many time students was setting idle and waiting for the class to start. We have to face very embracing situation in the front of authorities also. Apart from this because of this route many other local people and students are also suffering.
I request you to please continue to run the bus as it was running earlier, as there are many passengers in our village it will be not only be convenient form them only but all add revenue to the owner of the bus.
Hope you will consider the request.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully,
Maninder Vadhrah
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| 2021-09-05 | Maulik Mody | 84 | view |
| 2020-03-24 | vadhrahvirk | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...at route of the bus has been change and know it will be travelling to Ludhiana via M...
^^^^
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...a Mullapur which is another town in the near by area. Because of this change we are...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s another town in the near by area. Because of this change we are facing many probl...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...any problems firstly we have to move to near by town from our village on our own vehicl...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 431, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...g situation in the front of authorities also. Apart from this because of this route ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43951612903 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20840777628 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524193548387 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2653645709 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226156519133 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938290076782 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710779538777 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131124502411 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897304030447 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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