In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
In the modern world, older people expect to have a longer life than ever before, which is reflected by increasing life expectancy. However, recently, it's become a big deal that affects both individuals and society, leading to workforce shortage and increasing social services. Therefore, some measures should be allowed to reduce ageing populations influences.
Although increasing lifespan is what human initial expect, nowaday, their impact on our society is noticeable. Workforce and social services are areas that have substantial changes. For example, in industrialized countries, the lack of young employee become more serious. Because of the decreasing number of domestic workers, demands to seek foreign labours from developing countries are more important to maintain product manufacture. Besides, living longer life results in rising services for an older group of inhabitants such as healthcare, insurance fees, nursing home, pension, and social subsidy, which may become social burdens.
Rising life expectancy is a human achievement, whereas that impact is considerable, so governments should give some solutions to decrease its worse influences. Encouragement on giving birth should be taken into consideration to balance the workforce. In addition, rising the retirement age, making opportunities for those who wish to go back to work. Moreover, authorities should support social assistance in financial issues and help older civilians how to live more independently.
The human lifespan is longer in modern life, leading to a significant impact on society, particularly on workforce and social services. Some actions to solve those problems should be allowed properly by governments as well as social agreement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78823529412 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03178091255 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0635720033 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245358428815 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791421941555 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666443298877 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146123080097 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594755656072 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.