It is true that inappropriate lifestyle of people has a damaging effect on the environment. Therefore, it is mandatory to make changes in the lives of people to tackle environmental problems. Although the government is accountable to reduce the environment-related problems, there are numerous ways that the individuals can adopt so that the environment can be prevented.
Irrefutably, the trees are being cut down to provide accommodation to a large number of people, to manufacture products like furniture, doors, windows from wood and for many other purposes. As a result of this phenomenon, carbon dioxide is released into the atmosphere which leads to global warming. Therefore, individuals should not only make less use of products made from wood but also plant more and more trees so that the level of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere can be alleviated.
Apart from this, most of the objects that are used in daily lives are made up of plastic which is highly dangerous for the environment. To prevent the environment from this damage, masses should adopt the habit of reusing and recycling these objects. Moreover, people should find an alternative to these products. For instance, while going shopping ladies should take bag made of clothes with them to carry the things instead of putting them in polythene. In addition to this, the use of public transportation instead of private would also beneficial for the environment as it would mitigate the harmful gases released from the vehicle. These gases are responsible for the contamination of air.
To recapitulate, it can be stated that minor changes in the lives of people can bring tremendous improvement in the environment.
- The state of the enviroment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world Apart from government measures ad policies what can individuals do on a personal level to combat the negative effects that our lifestyles have on the enviroment 68
- In many countries, young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What do you think are reasons of these? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 11
- Some Psychologists say that doing absolutely nothing at the time of the day is best way to overcome stress. You agree or disagree to what extent. 56
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp 56
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opi 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ng cut down to provide accommodation to a large number of people, to manufacture products like fu...
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Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urposes. As a result of this phenomenon, carbon dioxide is released into the atmo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23443223443 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07629506935 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9267814685 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127834964377 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442011979973 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329098012455 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786771628313 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00802328231739 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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