There is a problem in the road outside your house Write a letter to your local councilor In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to bring into your attention about a problem with Lawerence Road.

My name is Sam living at 64 B, Lawerence Road from past 15 years and there is no issue found with the functioning of Municipal Council earlier.

Recently, a pathole has appeared on the road near to my house. I had already complained to local council about the issue but till now no action is taken. This could be a risk to life of people because monsoon will start from next month and with water in it serious accident may happen.

So, it is a humble request to you to address the department for completing its maintenance. It will be best if you initiate an audit for this area, by which you can observe how critical it is.

I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may take a suitable action on priority.

Yours faithfully,
Sam Took.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56962025316 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49203184585 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689873417722 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1470387247 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169731800829 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697204578372 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069239974562 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899759524894 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859566111805 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.