You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir,
My name is Samvedna Puri, dweller of Haward Street, North London. I am feeling hardhearted while inscribing this piece of epistle to lodge complaint regarding the unsatisfactory services which was experienced by me at your hotel last month. Being one of the renowned hotels of Newyork such services were not expected even tough it was three days stay during which i encountered with the issue of non-working of heating system.
Undeniably, during the prevailing season Newyork is exceptionally cold and denizens suffer from sever winters. Consequently, heating system becomes the plausible way of survival but on the contrary defective machinery in my room inflicted me health issues. Afterward, i bought a portable room heater in order to protect myself from harsh weather and left over there so other potential customer could utilise.
Even tough this premises enjoys goodwill but as a five star hotel bestowing ace services is the prime responsibility where it lacks. It would be highly appreciable if you could reimburse the price of room heater which i firmly believe is my right to claim for.
I anticipate a prompt and positive response from your end.
Your faithfully,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough it was three days stay during which i encountered with the issue of non-work...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gh it was three days stay during which i encountered with the issue of non-worki...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, regarding, so, well, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29896907216 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8302865298 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716494845361 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4321620844 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150374903535 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496953184309 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454850911366 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752744455699 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528701222598 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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