We live in an age that people tend to purchase garments, vehicles, and accessories from a well-known label. In my point of view, this trend has more negative aspects than positive ones.
Let us take a look at the reasons leading to this issue. There are various factors why people nowadays are driven to buy expensive items but the major one is most of them often associate a famous brand with quality. For instance, the iPhone is a relatively stable smartphone that can last for 1-2 years or more. On the other hand, when individuals buy a product from reputable brands, they buy not only the guarantee merchandise but also excellent customer services that are able to satisfy even irritable consumers. In addition, having a well-known brand item can express individuality and status.
In spite of the superior qualities of products from famous labels, there are some serious drawbacks that cause a range of social issues. First and foremost, companies owning famous brands may become monopolistic and have not any motivations to refine their products. Those corporations will dominate the global market, as a result, the smaller companies or startups completely have no opportunities to introduce their product and unable to sell them. Besides, some people use items from a well-known name as they want to show off their wealth with others. They buy the latest and limited version with the highest expenditure instead of using this amount of money to invest. Those who are not really well-off also desire to buy these expensive products even become thieves or killers, thereby causing complicated social problems.
In conclusion, some people buy famous brand commodities because of their high quality and the feeling of fitting in. However, this trend has negative impacts on small companies and even on society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, look, may, really, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14141414141 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64573202906 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0852425048 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234328445587 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07053806366 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487559256522 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13808478547 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038049771707 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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