Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to the advancement of technology as well as the huge demand for different sorts of entertainment, there is such a wide range of shows and programs offered through mass media. As a couch potato, rather than attending a live performance, staying at home and binge-watching it on TV is my go-to option since it is not only convenient but also economical.In these days and ages ,especially during corona virus outbreak, these ideas make sense than ever, along with simplify decision making.
In the 4.0 era, there is no need for audiences to travel such a long distance to see events in their presence.People are able to watch them from the beginning till the end in the conveniences of their own house. It’s advantageous that they don’t encounter any problems such as traffic congestion, being late or being infected while COVID19 is wide-spreading. Therefore, they could have light mood to enjoy it fully without worries . Besides, there is no limitation at all, comparing to live ones which have some particular rules to obey.For instance, during a play, under no circumstances could people get a drink or do the other stuffs.In contrast, audiences have freedom to do whatever they want while watching it through TV’s screen from home.
On top of that, it’s undeniable that a live performance costs an arm and leg and seeing the broadcasted one is such a good way to save money.Despite the fact that people would sooner observe their idol in real life, it will be irritating moment if the performance falls short of their expectation due to many aspects namely position, quality,…Meanwhile, just with 64 inch screen, staying at home, they could feel the atmosphere, the vibe and watch it with the best points of view free of charge.
To sum up, it is evident that observing broadcasted shows is obviously superior to attending the live one because of its convenience and the less money consumption.I do hope there will be more entertaining shows and performances for everyone to see while there are not so much things to do but watching TV and quarantine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 965.302439024 178% => OK
No of words: 349.0 196.424390244 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9340974212 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0174242293 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 106.607317073 203% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618911174785 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 283.868780488 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.673966541 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.25 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.625 22.9334400587 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.625 5.23603664747 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171553746615 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661361055023 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450250028801 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100143936686 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036221681627 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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