Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Ruchi, and I am a resident of Parsavnath society for last 5 years. I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards a serious concern in my neighborhood created by some teenagers by letting their dogs freely roam in the society.
There are number of problems which are being faced by me and other residents of the society as some youngsters are allowing their pets wander in the colony. Firstly, pedestrians cannot walk smoothly and older people cannot stroll over the parking area either. Secondly, children of the society are not safe during the time they play outside their homes. Last week, a girl of my neighborhood got attacked by one of this dog and upon further investigation we came to know that the dog is not vaccinated yet. Although appropriate medical actions have been taken at time for the safety of the girl, it could be a life threatening situation for her.
All the residents of the society had already requested their parents and warned those teenagers not to allow their dogs out. However, they always show an ignorant attitude.
I suggest you to take serious actions against the family of these teenagers and ask them to stop their action of taking their dogs out.
I am looking forward for a prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchi Verma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80444444444 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52102272016 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648888888889 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0376385803 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175120679753 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533096297401 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614894914929 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871830106155 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05004810679 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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