You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Smit
I am writing to ask for some time off from my occupation in the following month.
As you know, I am originally from Iran, and my parents and my siblings are living there. So, I have invited me to participate in my brother's marriage ceremony, which is really important for my family to visit me at the ceremony, and we celebrate it together afterwhile that I cannot be with them.
My brother's ceremony, which is held in my hometown, I cannot come because from 21 to 28 April I just want five days off in that two days will fall on the weekends' holiday.
I will have finished all the routine jobs until that week. However, I have one meeting with CJ limited company on 23 April, So Ms. Tomson has agreed to participate there.
I am looking forward to receiving your opinion about my mentioned request.
Yours Sincerely,
John Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eremony, which is held in my hometown, I cannot come because from 21 to 28 April ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5974025974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55074985916 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2391109179 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123898421036 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611312754787 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513670833297 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710832856902 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563331068267 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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