you ar having some trouble with a work colleage. Write to your employer.
explain what is the problem
describe how it is affecting you
make as suggestion about what could be done.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, currently designated as Executive Finance Officer. I am penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint about the reckless behavior of one of my fellow employee named John. As our company runs on a principle of Teamwork, he does not complete his task on the predefined schedule owing to which we have to miss deadlines.
Although he is exceptionally talented personnel who have core information regarding the organisation, due to his lethargic nature he does not maintain proper books of accounts. As a result, the delay on his part impedes my work of collaboration and finalization of data which eventually would attract the harsh legal litigation and tax implications.
I would respectfully suggest you to take some stringent actions against such employees so that the entire workforce would accomplish their work with in due dates. It would be highly appreciable if you penalized such lethargic staff at the time of annual appraisal meeting.
I am anticipating a prompt action from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Navdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...deep Puri, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, currently designated as Executive Fina...
^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...side. Yours faithfully, Navdeep Puri
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25139664804 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01113690757 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731843575419 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7224439372 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.444444444 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117296705405 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435836260172 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386564623051 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597296479817 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489941302329 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.