It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
No one can deny that there are both negative and positive aspects of friends. Some people prefer to make new friends. However, other people would like to keep old friends. If I were to choose one, I would like to hold my old friends for several reasons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, old friends are the best support that people can find from anyone, because they were, are, and will friends for so many years. In my case, when I passed through though time, I lost my parents in an accident car several years ago, and my friend was the most crucial person who stays with me in those rough times. I never forget his support.
Second, if you want to spend time, old friends are a better choice than a new one. Especially when people want to share anything whit someone. For instance, I’d like to play tennis, but for me, it is not only a game, but also it is my best time on the day where I can talk with my friend about so many things. Thus, those tennis games I can share with old friends.
Finally, confident it is another virtue that old friend have. In other words, people can trust to them that they want. For example, I am living in Argentina, but for business reasons, I have to move to the US, and I did not know who could take care of my kids, but my best old friend offering me that he can do it. For me, it was not only the best option, but also the best person who can take care of my children.
In conclusion, for all those reasons I mentioned above, I firmly believe that old friends are a better choice than make new friends.
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- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful What is your opinion 66
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
...nyone, because they were, are, and will friends for so many years. In my case, when I p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26821192053 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09529401428 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1664628257 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5625 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253418331518 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977418680396 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927465968803 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173690012737 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591688176104 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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