Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them.Others believe that intelligent children should be taught seperately and given special treatment.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Proper education sets the pillars of success for bright future of a child. Presently, some people state that it would be lucrative for masses if children possessing distinct abilities to learn are taught collectively by teachers. On the other hand,others claim that brilliant students should be taught seperately to get best out of them. Here, I would like to throw light on both aspects along with my own opinion.
Multifarious points can be put down to shore up the former view. To set in, teaching students of different capabilities under one roof will enable weaker students to learn from intel...
- Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them.Others believe that intelligent children should be taught seperately and given special treatment.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 80
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- Everyone should become vegetarian because people do not need to eat meat for healthy diet.Do you agree or disagree? 93
for bright future of a child.
for the bright future of a child.
Sentence: On the other hand,others claim that brilliant students should be taught seperately to get best out of them.
Error: seperately Suggestion: separately
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