Many stores sell organic fruits and vegetables (produce without the use of chemical fertilizers, pesticides and herbicides) even though they often cost more than conventional fruits and vetgetables.
Why do some people prefer to eat organic food? Do you think organic food is worth the extra cost?
Nowadays, some people prefer to eat organic food instead of conventional food. Although I understand the reasons why people like them, but I think it is not worth.
Firstly, organic fruits and vegetables are safe for our body. Normal food has some chemical substances that can damage our DNA and cause diseases like cancer, hypertension, heart stroke and so on. Furthermore, production of organic food is less harmful for environment because there are no chemical fetilizers, pesticides and herbicides.
Nevertheless, in my opinion, the conventional food is better. It's also for our health if farmers obey scientific protocols when harvesting, so chemical substances can disappear or we can eliminate them by many different ways. Besides, it's waste to plant organic food. A certain area for raising normal fruits and vetgetables can produce more products than the one that plan organic food. These kind of plants need more soil, water, time and human resources. If we don't plant organic food, we will feed more people in the world, especially the poor and homeless. Today, goverment are prompting companies to improve their chemical products for agricultural so they won't exacerbate environmental problems.
Overall, eating organic food is good, but conventional food is better because it saves our resources and provides more food for the needy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3661971831 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84955255179 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5080267544 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300458260524 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116124715821 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747260361545 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199901789963 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382826556356 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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