Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to update you regarding the incovenience that employees are facing with car parking.
From last one week, basement car parking is not available due to water logging issue. As of it, majority of the staff had to struggle hard for parking their cars. Even, nearest parking is 1 miles away, thus, a significant time is exhausted in this activity. Moreover, pungent smell of water is really impacting the health of people and before some one caches any critical illness this needs to be rectified.
I first complained to parking supervisior and came to know that it was delayed because regular technitian was out of town. For aligning other than that person, supervisior needs approval from you. Hence, I am requesting you to grant your approval to the concerned in order to get this job done from someone else.
I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may take the action at earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Roman Cook.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the nearest'.
Suggestion: , the nearest
...ruggle hard for parking their cars. Even, nearest parking is 1 miles away, thus, a signif...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...pacting the health of people and before some one caches any critical illness this needs ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92771084337 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59869770974 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5696056358 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735551223147 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287662759487 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0138080362832 0.0603063233224 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0399169533899 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00985078077012 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.