Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents, and therefore schools should not waste valuable time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum.
To what extent do you agree?
Parenthood must have sole responsibility to indulge their young ones for natural bodily activities whereas other opine that academic institutions for medium studies should not dispose important time in exertions.
I agree with this statement but not completely favour in the latter opinion.
I will substantiate the essay with examples in the following paragraphs.
In regardless of workout, there are numerous reasons academic institutions should include to students in workout activities.
Firstly, Education system have appropriate agenda list which are related to necessary exercises for better body because it is the primary concern for juveniles. For an example, there are many institutions in world who started the day with the smaller exercise.
Secondly, students can easily attract by the other students by seeing the other class mates activities. It has been observed through one survey children get easily manipulated by the other practical activities of peers.
Thirdly, attenders of institutions adhere the instructions only the teachers because of the certain afraid or fear. Because they perceive teacher can punish to them for not adhering their orders.
According to saying of parents, their adolescents are more attentive with their trainers.
However, needless to say, parents can also plays a vital role to involve their youngsters in the essential activities which leads to better health and in another words, a perfect health should be imperative concern for their kids.
To conclude, aforementioned above points, learning institutions is the place of doing body activities for the adulthood and it should not be only responsibility of parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65217391304 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92624688624 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5961202911 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121981630832 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380156261512 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440257950671 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467245787683 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445537267724 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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