Some people believe that work must take first priority in a person s life while others think that spending time with family is more important Discuss the advantages of both viewpoints and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any rele

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Some people believe that work must take first priority in a person's life while others think that spending time with family is more important.

Discuss the advantages of both viewpoints and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

write at least 250

Recently, there are a lot of discussions about work which are more important than work or vice versa and whether it is going to improve or not. This essay will discuss why this would be beneficial for both work and family.

The main reason why spending a lot time at office is necessary because work can support the expense of family. That is, simply, having more work or higher position at the office means more funds for the family to improve their life. For instance, to buy a house or an apartment, higher education or healthcare and vacation to abroad. This condition, actually is not a problem for a single person, but sometimes it will be an issue if workers has got married. Spending more time for works is a cause of divorce at household. The workers must explain clearly to the spouse about activities at office and can maximize their little time for the family. Time for family in not about length of time but it is about quality and meaning.

In addition to this, some people believe spending more time for family is a top priority because they can be close to their family or children. It is important, for example they have older parents, they have a lot of time to accompany their parents, actually if their parent getting illness and must be accompanied to the hospital. This condition, I think is not big problem if they are is self employed but it’s big problem for unemployment, because they can get money to meet their needs.

In conclusion, using time for work or family are having a detrimental impact on people life. An increase time in the work is a good idea not only because of the good precedent set by wealthy and job position but also the fact that it would improve their life if they can manage their little time to the family.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56918238994 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3931891975 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459119496855 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.481062805 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224534057826 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982073149036 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565879039166 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144136722656 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214267610569 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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