The advantages and disadvantages of Covid-19
Currently, we are having a very long holiday because of an outbreak of a dangerous epidemic called COVID-19. During this long time, I had the opportunity to explore about many different things in life.This epidemic brought both advantages and drawbacks.
This pandemic has caused many consequences seriously. The coronavirus COVID-19 is affecting a lot of countries and territories around the world. First of all, it has killed thousands of people, especially in China where the epidemic outbreak.Secondly, the economy of the world was negatively affected. Most businesses temporarily ceased operations and revenues in sectors such as services, tourism and hotels declined.Therefore, a lot of people faced unemployment in many places.Moreover, their lives become more difficult when their argiculture products like watermelon and blue dragon can not be exported. The next negative impart is that many students have to temporarily stop studying in a long time. This made their knowledge interrupted. Some schools have organized for student to online learning but this method also has many difficulties as unstable Internet connection.
However, this epidemic brings us some benefits. The first advantage is that the solidarity of the nations around the world has been raised to prevent from pandemic together.Because of the spread and the severity of the disease, many countries need to help each other to find medicines that can cure this disease. Next, people are more concerned about their health issue, so the awareness of people in disease prevention is enhanced. Finally, this is long enough for students to take care of themselves and their family.For instance, they can help their mother cook meals or they can do things that have not done before such as reading an interesting book, watching a fantastic movie and so on.
In conclusion, the COVID-19 has both positive and negative effects. Thanks to this time, we can explore many different things in life.I hope that everyone will join hands so that we can fight this dangerous epidemic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34674922601 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03193202986 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6515745816 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107919424198 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480058979954 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080541370566 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845587126059 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526660709191 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.