Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?
Some people think that the economic progress is important to a country. However, in measuring whether a country is successful, there are still other factors to consider.
Firstly, a good education system is very important to a country. Education provides different kinds of knowledge to people, which is critical for the maintenance and improvement of society. For example, teachers teach the ethical rules widely accepted in society, so that children know what should or should not be done. Their perception of how to behave well helps to maintain a peaceful society. Furthermore, the academic knowledge that people learned can inspire them of creativity and thus innovations. Therefore, whether there is a good education that covers most of the people in a country is an important factor in a country’s success.
Secondly, a well-established democratic ruling system, under which people can vote to choose their own ruler and the ruler’s rights are restricted by law, is also vital to the success of a country. Under such a system, people can criticize the ruler without fear of being punished. This helps the ruler to think about his own fault and to rectify it. Through this process, the progress of a society can be achieved. Under the ruling system of a dictatorship, on the contrary, people are afraid to speak out their thoughts. The ruler can never receive any good advice and realize what he has done wrong. As a result, improvement seldom appears.
In conclusion, besides the economic factor, a good education system and a well-established democratic ruling system are also important in assessing whether a country is successful. Among these, in my opinion, a democratic system is of the utmost importance as it provides a foundation for all others to be effectively implemented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18493150685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99115164743 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4181687259 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5882352941 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275282103262 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083948006144 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822255475207 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195512218978 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10984017347 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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