Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are opposing views about whether children should be taught at school to become better individuals of society or family is the suitable place for them to learn this from. While I understand why some people support the former view, I am still in favour of the latter.
People who believe that teachers or environments at school will facilitate the prospect of children learning this have several arguments. From their point of view, educators who have academic qualifications will have easily understandable teaching methods. Therefore, children are not just equipped with practical knowledge but also can apply and perform accurately in real life. Another point to be made is that learning at school offer a social environment. This means that after learning the theory, students will have many friends to discuss or practising with. By doing this, they can absorb the large amount of knowledge readily as well as foster their interpesonal skills such as ways of teamworking or discussing.
Nevertheless, I still side with those who believe children should be taught at home. This is because of parents have lived together with their kids since they were born so they are the one who know them best. Therefore they will know what their kids need to learn or what they lack and will have a suitable way to educate them. Another reason to be given is that by living close to their family, whenever children have a bad behaviour or do something wrong, their family can simultaneously adjust it. For example, some children may have a habit of saying bad words, if their family can hear it they can directly punish them.
In conclusion, despite acknowlege why people think school will help to teach children, I hold the belief that parents are better instrutor for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00673400673 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59456831448 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6516730288 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233934009453 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906031119515 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646730587926 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170049982945 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574675191365 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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