Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
Nowadays interaction between many people has much altered from the past because of the advance of technology. From my perspective, this has affect relationships in various ways but in different terms it can be a postive development.
There are several impacts which can be reaped from the improvement of technology, the most important of which related to the overuse of mobile phones and technological products. At home, many teenagers are spending too much time on their phone without paying attention to their relatives and family members. In a long run, it can lead to the state of becoming dependent on it and they will have a tendency to communicate less with their parents, as a reason for weaken family bonds. For example, after a long day at schools, children get home and often play videogames on their smartphone or computer until nights and go to school in the next morning. That cycle keep repeating daily therefore the time spent with families is lessen and gradually the relationships between them will be broken off.
Despite the aforementioned negativity, technology does have several benefits which are worth being mentioned. As for the former, modern companies now have utilised the features of computer in maximizing work productivity. Chiefs are now organizing online meetings by using applications on the Internet. By doing this, employees are allowed to work from home, which can save time to commute to companies and also save money for fuels. Therefore, they have more time to invest in their commission and improve work productivity. Another benefit could be the improvement of academic qualification thanks to the development of projector. They are now used in new teaching methods of modern schools which can have educator to illustrate the theory more accurately and realistic. This is an important key to make the lessons more understandable and help pupil to absorb the large amount of knowledge easier.
In conclusion, while in educational or working aspects, applying technology can be beneficial, it also has several drawbacks in family relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lessened'.
Suggestion: lessened
...erefore the time spent with families is lessen and gradually the relationships between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25074626866 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98179820189 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5655468837 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.9375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130265926395 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421070756452 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520159934724 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972030094927 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832597590644 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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