yOu have been styding overseas and staying as a guest with a family for the last 6 months and have recently
returned at home .
write to the family
Thank them for having you
Say what you enjoyed about living with them
Tell them what your current plans are.
Dear Brown,
I reached to India last week safely and I am penning down this epistle to convey my sincere thanks to you for such a spellbinder hospitality at your house in London. It was so kind of you to open your home to me during my tertiary studies at Oxford Universities. During my stay I really spent a lovely time with you and I had a great experience.
Even though I have honed my culinary- skills, still I missed your wonderful meals. Moreover, how I could forget about your unconditional support while preparing for my final assessments? Indeed, you worked quite hard to prepare notes and assignments for me.
You would be on cloud nine to hear that I have been selected as an internee in a top-notch accounting firm. After the internship , I would definitely try to secure a job of Financial officer in Canadian subsidiaries of this Firm . As I aspire to migrate to Canada, thus this job would be act as a milestone in my career.
I hope you are well and hope we will be in touch. Take care and stay healthy.
Yours sincerely,
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lity at your house in London. It was so kind of you to open your home to me duri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., you worked quite hard to prepare notes and assignments for me. You would be...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that I have been selected as an internee in a top-notch accounting firm. After th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ch accounting firm. After the internship , I would definitely try to secure a job ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would definitely try to secure a job of Financial officer in Canadian subsidiari...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er in Canadian subsidiaries of this Firm . As I aspire to migrate to Canada, thus ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, really, so, still, thus, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72399318811 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678947368421 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9500881833 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227695675273 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747177001104 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459789180601 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120159278302 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533758093493 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.