Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interest than their jobs.
Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
Work-life balance is a concept that emphasizes the importance of professional and personal life in one's perception. In my personal view, spending time for hobbies and leisure activities is equally crucial to working, and the best way is focusing on both , in order to maintain a balance in life and lead a meaningful, fruitful life.
On the one hand, working undeniably defines who we are and how each individual contribute to the general growth of the society. Executing our jobs perfectly results in a steady in a steady income without debt burdens and thus, contentment in life. Specially, in certain fortunate extents when a person considers his daily job as intriguing and attracting, working for him is now seen as a hobby ,a means of entertainment. Around the globe, there are existing instances of workaholics whose continuous attributions are priceless that are scientists. Devoting fully themselves to researching and devising breakthroughs. History has proved those works to be extremely vital to human revolution. However, there are also chances that workaholics tend to move towards isolation when loss situations and crisis occur, exerting severe pressure on their life both mentally and physically, even encroaching upon their home and unwinding time.
On the other hand, people emphasizing more on activities they find interesting are more likely to enjoy a happier life. Instead of being struck behind the desk and working just for a living as a huge number of workers, those hobbies-preferable can avoid stress from death-end workload from offices with contentment used as a quote of life. Skeptics often state that these tendency highly likely result in negligence in professional life and consequently, economic crisis, reality has proved the contrary. According to many scientific findings, leisure interests can not only enhance physical health, but also heal mental problems. For instances, playing golf and immersing in the virtual world during an adequate amount of time are best solutions for relaxation after a tiring workday full of pressure.
In sum, we are the ultimate architect of our life and the paths people pursue define their coming future. Above all, Work-life balance is one of the keys to success; nevertheless, preferring hobbies or job is an individual choice that relies on a person's circumstance and characteristics. In order to promoting this tendency in the workplace, businesses and the government should rationalize working time so that workers are able to gathering with their families or enjoying their leisure pursuits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36881188119 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0262137766 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611386138614 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9139051155 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.588235294 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230981784457 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654383789237 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515755736605 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137044692344 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028146866298 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.