The question of how governments should spend their money has been debated for many years. I strongly believe that governments should spend their money on facilities like playgrounds, public swimming pool instead of art and music museums.I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people spend more time on working, so after working their really need to embark on places such as public swimming pools for maintaining their health. If governments invest their money on facilities like playgrounds or public swimming pools, people don’t need to go to hospitals, and governments can save a lot of money since people are in good health. I consider all of these to be things that we should deeply concerned about.
Secondly, of course there are some who thinking that paying taxes are not so useful because governments don’t build some places for people’s entertainment like playgrounds or public swimming pools, and think there taxes are being wasted.I think this is a miss-guiding idea. When governments spend money on facilities like playgrounds or public swimming pools, people know that their taxes spend for their well fare, and they are being delighted by their governments.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that governments should spend their money on facilities like playgrounds and public swimming pools for people’s health and their well fare.
The question of how governments should spend their money has been debated for many years. I strongly believe that governments should spend their money on facilities like playgrounds, public swimming pool instead of art and music museums.I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, people spend more time on working, so after working their really need to embark on places such as public swimming pools for maintaining their health. If governments invest their money on facilities like playgrounds or public swimming pools, people don’t need to go to hospitals, and governments can save a lot of money since people are in good health. I consider all of these to be things that we should deeply concerned about.
Secondly, of course there are some who thinking that paying taxes are not so useful because governments don’t build some places for people’s entertainment like playgrounds or public swimming pools, and think there taxes are being wasted.I think this is a miss-guiding idea. When governments spend money on facilities like playgrounds or public swimming pools, people know that their taxes spend for their well fare, and they are being delighted by their governments.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that governments should spend their money on facilities like playgrounds and public swimming pools for people’s health and their well fare.
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...being delighted by their governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i think, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 1977.66487455 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 407.700716846 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18120805369 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68233128651 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 212.727598566 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 618.680645161 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4504392651 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.4 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6 5.45110844103 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379265383474 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205948108948 0.076458572812 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120622341433 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310699922274 0.150856017488 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00401809669129 0.0645574589148 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 86.8835125448 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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