the bar chart shows the number of male and female arrested by type of offence

Essay topics:

the bar chart shows the number of male and female arrested by type of offence

The below bar chart compares the percentage of offenders commit crimes in both genders over a period of one year.
Overall, the most noticeable point as i can see from the chart that both sexes engaged in violence had by far the highest number of wrongdoers. Meanwhile, the proportion of people commiting robbery accounted a minority over the shown period.
It is clear that violence against the person took up the largest law-breakers in comparision with others, at nearly 35%, which was 10 times higher than the number of people related to Robbery or Fraud and Forgery. Besides, the second place belonged to crime who were recorded by theft and handling stolen goods, standing at 30 % for men and 20% for women.
The percentage of male and female convicted other offences were similar, with 15% and 13% respectively, which doubled the number of drug offences in 2008. The number of men arrested by criminal damage and burglary were higher than that of women, standing at 10% and 7%, 8% and 3% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Overall, the most noticeable point as i can see from the chart that both sexes ...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iolence had by far the highest number of wrongdoers. Meanwhile, the proportion of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91279069767 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59844431544 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9471377772 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196632866888 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794590536471 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753319388891 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107388634588 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788018841204 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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