Over the past few years, there have been a long ongoing debate about the credibility of
the facts prevailing in various aspects of life. Some has turned out to be dubious and the others
have proven their presence. The author of the essay asserts that any facts of information should
be taken as fallacious since the probability of proving the fact as false is higher in the future.
I, to an extent agree with this statement that the facts are to be mistrusted as it has an grey
area which cannot be discovered no matter what greater lengths we traverse.
To begin, A fact could be baseless or could have resulted from a misconducted experiment. We just
don't know yet, whether the experiment being conducted, takes all the variables into account exactly as it
is or as an assumption. The consequences of such experiment can result in a fact that is assumed to
be true, However could be proven wrong if the value of assumed variables is not in accordance with the
exact finding of the variable. Take space exploration for example, Our Research says that We live in "The
Milky way galaxy" which spans about a distance of 25 light years. This fact will be solid only if the
techniques used to derive the distance about the galaxy is right. If a scientist finds a technique which is
far more accurer than the previous technique. Then the imperior one could potentially result in different result
about the distance of the galaxy. Thus the example shows that A fact could be proven wrong if the assumption
on which it is based is proven wrong.
Moreover, There could be facts that have been passed to us from our ancestors. These facts may not very well
fit in our modern world as they fit in our ancestor times. For example, In India there is a saying that goes
"We should not cut our nails after the evening". This saying may hold true when we live in a world which lacked
the sophostication of electricity, since a lack of light would not be suitable for trimming of nails. But since
we are in a world that has been engineered to make night as a day; Thanks to the invention of electricity, There
is no reason to believe that "We shouldnt trim our nails". This example shows us that the facts can be made baseless
since the time on which it has been derived is changed. History only tells us that the fact which is true for now
can change at anytime in the future.
Some may argue, by saying that the fact will hold true if it is been derived through a rigourous and correct
way of considering the assumption. But who knows, This derivation may fail or the way in which it's derived may
very well be enhanced, if thats the case then the fact will change whatsoever. In essence, Any piece of information
considered as fact should be mistrusted, since there are lot of ways that a condition on which the fact is
based could vary. History also gives us the result that is no other than "facts could always change".
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... ongoing debate about the credibility of the facts prevailing in various aspects ...
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...rts that any facts of information should be taken as fallacious since the probabi...
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...he facts are to be mistrusted as it has an grey area which cannot be discovered ...
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...s are to be mistrusted as it has an grey area which cannot be discovered no matte...
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... from a misconducted experiment. We just dont know yet, whether the experiment be...
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...om a misconducted experiment. We just dont know yet, whether the experiment being ...
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...the variables into account exactly as it is or as an assumption. The consequences...
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... can result in a fact that is assumed to be true, However could be proven wrong i...
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... variables is not in accordance with the exact finding of the variable. Take spac...
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... Research says that We live in 'The Milky way galaxy' which spans about...
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...ars. This fact will be solid only if the techniques used to derive the distance a...
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...the distance about the galaxy is right. If a scientist finds a technique which is ...
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...f a scientist finds a technique which is far more accurer than the previous techn...
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...d potentially result in different result about the distance of the galaxy. Thus t...
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...ult about the distance of the galaxy. Thus the example shows that A fact could be ...
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... could be proven wrong if the assumption on which it is based is proven wrong. ...
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...ancestors. These facts may not very well fit in our modern world as they fit in o...
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...le, In India there is a saying that goes 'We should not cut our nails after ...
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...rue when we live in a world which lacked the sophostication of electricity, since...
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...uitable for trimming of nails. But since we are in a world that has been engineer...
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...s to the invention of electricity, There is no reason to believe that 'We sh...
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...s us that the fact which is true for now can change at anytime in the future. ...
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... derived through a rigourous and correct way of considering the assumption. But w...
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...fail or the way in which its derived may very well be enhanced, if thats the case...
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...derived may very well be enhanced, if thats the case then the fact will change what...
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...er. In essence, Any piece of information considered as fact should be mistrusted,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.5258426966 195% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67735849057 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5869053001 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458490566038 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.436258087 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.782608696 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0434782609 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13043478261 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.97078651685 583% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312660279488 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100483352629 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794293820854 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918031212258 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721364117933 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.