Imagine yourself 20 years from now. What would you like to hear people saying about you? What can you do between now and then so that people will say that?
In the next 20 years, I want people to think about me as a girl with a happy life. Because at present, I am fighting with depression every single day.
I can not feel happy, or something like that, and I do not want it to follow me still at the end of my life. For me, happiness is the most important thing. If you do not feel happy, you just existence, not live. Other people want to be rich, or successful in the future, they think money can solve all of their problems. It is true, but it is not always right, when they have enough money, they will recognize that they were lost many things, like their parents, friends, or their youth. My father always says that " you do not need to become a rich woman to make me proud, you just need to live happier than yesterday".
Now, depression is still destroying me every day and I am not sure that I can continue the fight with it, or I am going to kill myself but I am thinking positively. So I believe that I can be a happy girl someday.
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| 2020-05-04 | duongtrinhtieuvan23 | 95 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12820512821 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35419806319 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0254471868 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203750009673 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756556053037 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650817148774 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110775337421 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559197187454 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.