everyone should become vegetation because people do not need to eat meet for healthy diet. do you agree and disagree with given statement.
It is universally acknowledged that health is wealth. life without health is like soup without salt. nowadays, people do not like to eat non vegetarian food like meat and beef, thus everyone ought to become vegetarian here, I would like to accord with given statement firmly.
There are multifarious points to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, people can adopt other ways rather than eating meat. For example, the establishment of health center, yoga classes where they do physical exercise is lucrative to keep healthy. As a result, people do not like to eat meat. furthermore, the ...
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sir is this essay relevant to
sir is this essay relevant to the topic ????
I m in big doubt about relevancy ????
plzz inform me quickly ..... can this essay get 6.0 in real ielts test ....becoz it is written as same as its been written in real test ??
The topic is: ....for healthy
The topic is: ....for healthy diet, while you make it: ...for health. which extends the topic a little bit. but it deserves 6.0 for the overall performance.
can this essay get 6.0 in
can this essay get 6.0 in reality ? ????
r u sure ???
As the essay is a little bit
As the essay is a little bit out of topic, if the graders for IELTS take it very serious, the score could be 0 or much less than 6.0.
However, we still think the essay deserves 6.0 for the overall performance.
thts what I was talking to
thts what I was talking to ...... where I mean from which points u consider this topic away from reality ??
The essay is about 'healthy
The essay is about 'healthy diet'. You may talk from following reasons if you like to agree:
1. A vegetarian diet would be preferable in terms of being cheaper and eco-friendly. Meat may be harmful to body because of pollution.
2. It is unnecessary to kill animals for food when plenty of vegetarian options are available.
3. Vegetarians can take the same important vitamins received from vegetation as received from meat.
4. A vegetarian diet may reduce the risk of diseases like cancer.
tnxxx a.lot sir ....I hope
tnxxx a.lot sir ....I hope examiner would like the essay n give good score
the introduction of medical facilities allow them to keep healthy as several medicines available in market which fruitful to overcome
the introduction ... allows them to keep healthy as several medicines available in market which is fruitful to overcome
meat and beef prepare by killing animals and animals is important
meat and beef are prepared by killing animals and animals are important
some animal species at the low ebb due to making meat.
some animal species are at the low ebb due to making meat.
animals is beautiful creation of nature
animals are the beautiful creation of nature
thus some prefers to eat meet for their health.
thus some prefer to eat meat for their health.
everyone want to live healthier lifestyle
everyone wants to live in a healthier lifestyle
Although meat is good for health.
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