The given line graph illustrates the figure of clients in some restaurants in Vietnam in 2019.
As can be seen from the graph, the quantity of customer of restaurants fluctuated. The number of clients of City Beer Station and Vuvuzela considerably rose in middle year. In contrast, the data of customer of Hungton, Daruma and Gogi House were significantly decreased in this period.
The statistic of client of Gogi House reached a peak of 13 000 people in 1st2019, 3 000 people more than the figure of that of Daruma. From February to October, the number of customer of Gogi House, Daruma and Hutong were sharply decline. The number of clients of Gogi House hit the highest point 15 000, 1 000 more than the quantity of that of Daruma in December. However, figure’s customer of Hutong was upward trend 6000 in December.
On the other hand, the number of customer of vuvuzela considerably rose from 5000 in January to 13 000 in July and the quantity of clients of Vuvuzela peaked at 13000 in July, then, we can see downward trend 6000 of Vuvuzela in December. Figure’s customer of City beer station slightly rose from 5000 in January to 12 000 in august, but data’s clients of City beer dramatically dropped at 5000 in December.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'declined'.
Suggestion: declined
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60338241524 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6889852426 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.444444444 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968846606893 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488114055688 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355379827978 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073121198097 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149571672664 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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