Since living in today's busy world provides so little time for people to recover their mind from the stresses of work and everyday life, how to spend it is a significant issue. While many people incline to perform activities, which improve their mental performance, others tend to spend their spare time just by relaxing. This essay will discuss both sides of views in more detail. Besides, it will investigate how playing intellectual games and exercising the mind by reading can be useful to have a suitable leisure time.
As regards that books open a window to new worlds, studying is an effective way to provoke the soul. Indeed, reading by conduction to the fictional worlds, free the mind from preoccupations. Furthermore, solving puzzles during free times is a way that helps to enhance the creativity sense, actually, mentally games and reading exercise the mind and to improve its efficiency and prevent to suffer diseases that disorder the brain performance like Alzheimer. As respects to these benefits, many companies such as Microsoft encourage their employees reading or solving Sudoku puzzles when they are free. For these reasons, some assert that fulfilment activities which improve mind are imperative.
On the other hand, it is claimed the key to obtain peacefulness and relaxation is resting the mind. Therefore, people who are exhausted from their work environment desire to rest their brains during leisure time, so they do not incline to fulfil intellectual activities. To illustrate this, the results of a study indicate individuals that have attention to resting their minds are more satisfied and enthusiastic at work. Hence, relaxing the mind is popular among many people.
Inasmuch as people spend a long time working, having convenient leisure time is vital for everybody's life. This essay discussed why resting the brain is essential during leisure time, but why nurture the mind would be more beneficial. In my opinion, studying or solving puzzles is the proper ways of spending free time, since it helps to be more active in the mental aspect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as regards, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17210682493 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.690008771 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8460128797 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370715435209 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11787659308 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559775415841 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229016868883 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399076332171 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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