Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, there's a violate debate over the issue of whether to have history class for students who do not major in history. Some people hold the idea that history is essential for all people while others have a different opinion. As far as I'm concerned, I believe university should not ask students to take history course compulsorily. My reasons are as follows.
Admittedly, history plays a significant role for students to comprehend the world and their view in a systematic way. For example, a stock manager might pick up some experience from a course about finicial history, like the signals about up and down of the markect exchange. In this case, even this manager's major is economy, historical information may still help him to avoid danger in his career when encountering with the similiar situation.
However, taking history course is still an extra benefit for students majoring other than history, which means there are still other courses, like psychology, presentation course, that could also provide extra benefits. If history become a compulsory course in the university, what about other courses? According to a convey conducted by Peking University aiming to find out the average spare time of teenages, 80% of students complained about they experienced the shortage of time recently due to the heavy burden coming from their assignments. Accordingly, taking an extra course would no doubt cast more pressure on students.
Besides, focusing on one field would help the students of university become an expert of their majors, which will benefit them more when trying to find a proper job in the future. For example, nearly all celebrities are famous for one prespective instead of being an profession in all fields. For example, Kobe Bryant was an wonderful basketball player yet he could barely sing a song. Thus, it is already pretty difficult to become top 10% of your major, and taking other knowledge will definitely make it harder. As one of my teachers once said, all you need to do in order to succeed is that indulging yourself into one area until you are better than 90% of your peers.
In sum, as the reasons that I mentioned above, students nowadays already have a great amount of other knowledge to learn and all they need is sharping their skill in their own major. So I strongly disagree that university requires students to take history course no matter what their majors are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, however, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01488833747 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62155726261 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573200992556 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3025400666 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279488308663 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909599568087 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080867561219 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159502078942 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738832953008 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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