You would like to work for a company or organisation in a foreign country.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
• Describe the kind of job you would like to do
• Explain which country or part of the world you would like to work in
• Tell them why you are interested in working in another country
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to apply for a job working abroad.
I would be particularly interested in working in the service sector. I have experience managing a bar and have spent a significant number of years employed by hotels, theme parks, and other tourist attractions. I have developed an excellent knowledge of working practices within the leisure industry and have outstanding interpersonal skills and the ability to be disciplined, organized, punctual and hard-working.
I am especially keen to find employment in the Spanish-speaking world. I have a Degree in Spanish and South American Studies and am a fluent speaker of the language. Obviously, this makes me more employable in these countries and would also give me the opportunity to improve my language skills further.
The prospect of living and working abroad fills me with excitement and anticipation. I love the idea of experiencing new ways of doing things and I want to broaden my horizons and gain a deeper understanding of different cultures. I must admit that the thought of being somewhere warmer where the sun makes regular appearances also appeals to me.
I have attached my Curriculum Vitae. However, if you require further details, please do not hesitate to contact me. I would be very willing to discuss my application at the interview.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rebekka Udal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ting to apply for a job working abroad. I would be particularly interested in wo...
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...ested in working in the service sector. I have experience managing a bar and have...
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...e parks, and other tourist attractions. I have developed an excellent knowledge o...
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..., organized, punctual and hard-working. I am especially keen to find employment ...
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...nized, punctual and hard-working. I am especially keen to find employment i...
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...ployment in the Spanish-speaking world. I have a Degree in Spanish and South Amer...
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... to improve my language skills further. The prospect of living and working abroa...
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...iscuss my application at the interview. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
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...hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rebekka Udal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21929824561 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13642801144 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65350877193 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2370702647 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1747014099 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550897878072 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445116026404 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792585513371 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457686041708 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.