The number of people who are interested in wearing fashionable clothes is increasing.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In the last few decades, fashion trend has changed a lot. There is a tremendous increase in the count of individuals who prefer to wear designer clothes. Strata of the populace believe that it is a negative development as these big brands exploit human resources. Contrarily, opponent deems it to be a positive development, even, I believe it is positive growth.
To begin with, firstly, people have become a fashion freak because they have enough disposable income through which they express themselves as fashion conscious. Nowadays, a person is recognized by his attire instead of knowledge or study. To describe in other words, clothes are a vestige of financial status. Apart from this, they try to imitate fashion symbols such as celebrities, popular personality in order to look like them. For instance, the survey done by “The Times” reveals that 79 percent of people accept that they wear clothes in order to enhance their personality and dominate others.
However, some people believe that it is a negative development because the workers in the fashion industry are not treated well and get a very low income. Even though, I believe it is a positive development because directly or indirectly the fashion industry generates huge revenue for the government which is later used for providing services to the people. Additionally, it also provides employment to the number of people and assists in decreasing the unemployment rate of the area. Furthermore, some industries also teach people some skills and train them in a particular area which makes them self-dependent and self-reliant and makes an impression on others that education is an indispensable part of human life. For instance, it is noticed that around 67 percent of fashion companies appoint local people for the company and arrange training for them before their actual joining.
To conclude, being fashionable has become an important aspect in order to represent societal status and for enhancing looks. This love for fashion has increased employment opportunities and made people self-dependent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29305135952 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92408114548 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6261072706 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313106203786 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914117591686 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540980629315 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174903712191 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323123246869 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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