Some people prefer to do the same job their entire life rather than frequently changing jobs.
Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the belief towards the job has been changed. Strata of the populace have thought that one should opt for the same occupation for the whole life. Contrarily, opponent deems that an individual should change the job after a certain time. There are various reasons for both points of view. In my opinion, it is a positive development.
To begin with, the reasons for my belief are, firstly, if one will pursue one particular job he will be equipped with a thorough knowledge of particular subject or talent. After mastering the skills, they can become role models for the new appointees. Secondly, they will be financially stable. As monthly pay is fixed which means there will be no financial crisis which in turn cuts down the conflicts in the family which occurs due to money. To illustrate, around 69 percent of people in the government sector agree that doing the same work in the department equip them with in-depth knowledge and also assists in making the family happy.
Furthermore, it is a positive development because talent and skills are built in the people that make them more confident about their work and job. Additionally, they has job security which is necessary to live life without and stress, which results in a healthy and happy life. The consequence of all this is more fruitful business. Apart from this, one need not struggle to acquire job after certain period of time which can be very tiring and disappointing. For instance, the survey done by “The Time” reveals that 76 percent of employers believe that happy employees are more enthusiastic and result-oriented rather people who have to change jobs regularly end up in disappointment.
To conclude, changing jobs frequently will lead to dissatisfaction in life, however, regular job guarantees job satisfaction and stable financial status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ondly, they will be financially stable. As monthly pay is fixed which means there ...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... their work and job. Additionally, they has job security which is necessary to live...
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Line 4, column 402, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t struggle to acquire job after certain period of time which can be very tiring and disappoint...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06578947368 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79194745077 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9160922723 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265317398646 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787363268544 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659462626221 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171185405863 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857857462726 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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