In the present era, family structure plus rules and regulations of the families have changed as compared to the past, there are numerous reasons of these changes. I would discuss the reasons of changes occurring along with my opinion on positive or negative development in the impending paragraphs.
To commence with, in past, joint families were more common, in which maximum three to four generations were lived together in the same roof, whereas, now, nuclear families are more popular, only one to two generations are lived together, this is the biggest change in the family structure. Moreover, people had adopt the global culture has compared to their own traditional cultures.
Moving further, it is undeniable that in previous years, majority of women were housewives, but, in the modern era, position of the women had changed, now, women go outside and work as equal to men. Nowadays, women are in a very respectable position such as entrepreneurs, doctors, commissioners and teachers.
Additionally, from my perspective, it is a positive development because in this way a family earned double income because both men and women earned, consequences of this, standard of living of the people increased plus they can provide good education to their children. Furthermore, when a child remain in the nuclear family, that one become more independent has compared to the children live in the joint family.
To recapitulate, there are various changes occur in the family system than past, now, nuclear families and western cultures are common in families and from my views, this is a positive development because person can become independent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29924242424 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85894025313 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9979423548 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.444444444 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237850868514 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994581344556 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992098561734 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14449532988 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108238134744 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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