Nowadays, vegetarian diets have become increasingly popular among certain demographics of society. These people choose this style due to ethical reasons including animals’ rights, for environmental factors, or even the effects it on the health. This essay will consider why a balanced diet, involving both vegetables and meats are vital to healthiness.
Morally speaking, the environmentalists contend that animals have the right to life and slaughter them is obviously unethical. Indeed, if we want to reduce the human impact on the environment, the simplest and cheapest thing anyone can do is to eat less meat. In terms of health, being a vegetarian mitigate the probability of suffering to diseases like blood pressure, obesity and even help to control diabetes by making the body more responsive to insulin, and altogether alleviate the risk of death. According to a study has done by Oxford University, vegetarians live 20% longer. With none of the saturated fat and cholesterol, vegetarians may be at a lower risk of chronic diseases overall. Hence, advocates of vegans claim this diet is healthier.
Although vegetable food is rich in nutrients, they would not be able to provide some important micronutrients like protein, minerals and omega-3 fatty acids, and a nutritional deficiency can lead to symptoms like fatigue, weakness, anaemia, bone loss and thyroid issues. Further, these diets increase the risk of colorectal cancer and lower bone mineral density so that may influence the bone metabolism. Therefore, a vegetable diet t does not guarantee the health of the body alone.
This essay discussed this idea that people who think all people must eliminate animals' meat and their other products from their meals have a flawed understanding of requirement nutritional and underestimate the effects of what they believe. In my opinion, animal proteins are an absolute imperative, besides, without balanced and nutritious meals, achievement to good health will not be possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, may, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41479099678 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99106584889 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668810289389 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2822072553 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111708178183 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036251585027 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319032142511 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632513546327 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286328859676 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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