People work because they need money to live. What are some others reasons that people work? Discuss one or more reasons.
it is true that monetary benefits are the major driving motivation that urges people to get to work. I believe that there are a few more reasons that drive not most but a major chunk of population to work, people do work for social causes, personal satisfaction and happiness and to support the dependents. through this essay I would like to enlighten these reasons that are often ignored when considering what reasons move a person to get to work.
First and foremost, social causes, these may be for the wellbeing of a faction or whole communities many people devote their whole lives for certain causes. For example, social worker working at charitable organizations that may be serving children, elderly, hospital patients or the essential service worker like paramedics, police, firefighter and soldiers who put their lives on the line so that other could have a safe and comfortable life. In my opinion it would be degrading to compare their sacrifices to monetary benefits because in most of the cases these organizations and divisions are strained for money and are dependent on donations to go by, and the debt for the services they provide can never be paid in full for their dedication and sacrifices are inestimable.
Secondly, there are many that work in a certain field because they get personal satisfaction and enjoy their work even if the money they earn is just enough to scrape by. For example, people working as artists and musicians or many or in many other not well paid jobs. For example, I know that many artists would rather sleep empty stomach than give up on their dream projects, even if an opportunity arises that pay them more and promises a comfortable life. it raises a question why do they still work? it’s because their art or works are a source of satisfaction on which they are proud.
In my opinion it’s unfair to categorically say that people work because they need money to live as there are many reasons for which people work and as evident by some of the reasons mentioned above they are just causes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85552407932 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58513135529 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498583569405 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8848203723 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399040487839 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167973615796 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127330636099 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297816842915 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154786165398 0.0645574589148 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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