Many people think that more money will make them happier. How important is money for happiness?
Money has become an inevitable part of the contemporary world. There are a group of people you say that money can't buy you happiness and money is not an important part of life. On the other hand, there are people, who think that money is an integral part of living and it can indeed get you happiness. This essay agrees with the later and will try to shed light into the pros of it.
Firstly, for achieving the trinitarian factors of live money is needed, that is food, water and shelter. The basic need of every human being is to have food, water and a safe place to dwell in. In the contemporary world to achieve the latter said money is inevitable. There are people who say that peace of mind is the most important thing and it cannot be achieved by money. To really attain the peacefulness, humans must be able to satisfy his basic needs, and that can be only achieved by money.
Secondly, to stay healthy and get proper treatment for diseases. Even though it is said that health is wealth, nowadays it can be said that wealth is health. In the contemporary world to look after your health a whole lot of money is required. Even if we consider the scenario where a person is not sick, but for him to take care of his health and have healthy diet money is an important factor. The healthy diet costs a huge these days and to workout most people prefer a gym, these all can be achieved by money only. Subsequently, if you are a sick person, to get the proper treatment it cost a lot these days.
To recapitulate, to have the basic needs of living, that is food, water and shelter, other than that to stay healthy and get proper treatment money is inevitable. As the world is moving towards money-oriented living. It is a must that we all earn sufficient money and then preach about the philosophy of peaceful living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: groups
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...orary world to look after your health a whole lot of money is required. Even if we consid...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44047619048 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42442456412 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7101844536 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258803680929 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895356980242 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630709574756 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162291149666 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450052301945 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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