There are several of situations that we all have to face in this diversified society. Some people think that to accept what had happened in our lived rather than try to change it while others think that try to solve the problems is more effective in life. I believe as a human being that keep trying new thing and find the way out of the bad situation is the only solution to live in this society.
On the one hand, ups and downs are part of life, part of our humanity, the cleaver way to deal with the bad situation of life is keep trying. Every person has to challenge in different situation since we were young and every challenging from life is the best lessons that can inspire our abilities or power. Dealing with the problems, which means you have abilities to achieve the goal and that is how the most successful person do. For example, the wealthier person in my country was born in a poor family, but he knows how to improve himself from negative situation. He was failed on his first business on his age 20’s, after 10 years keep of trying, he finally achieve a famous business and now he become a top rich man in my country. I believe that there are much more possibility that we can change the thing from bad to good and make our life more easier.
On the other hand, some people argue that the best ways is accept the failure because there is always a bad situation that is hardly changes. There is no a certain fair of life for everyone. Some people believe that is waste of time to change the situation that they have face. They tend to be accepted what they have been experienced rather than change it. For example, one of my friends, she feels that there is always a bad luck happened to her because she was born in a poor family. She never thinks to change of life and gives it a try, instead of blamed the disaster that she has experienced. These people don't have any motivation to do any change for themselves; they tend to accept what have happen to them.
In conclusion, although there is several people believe that is impossible to change the bad thing they had experienced, I believe that as human beings that we have to try our best to improve our ability in order to achieve a better life.
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- Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
...ter 10 years keep of trying, he finally achieve a famous business and now he become a t...
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Line 3, column 850, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...hing from bad to good and make our life more easier. On the other hand, some people argu...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accepted'.
Suggestion: accepted
...some people argue that the best ways is accept the failure because there is always a b...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...uation that is hardly changes. There is no a certain fair of life for everyone. So...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
... to change the situation that they have face. They tend to be accepted what they hav...
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Line 5, column 613, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... that she has experienced. These people dont have any motivation to do any change fo...
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Line 5, column 701, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...emselves; they tend to accept what have happen to them. In conclusion, although the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38405797101 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27929365904 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45652173913 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2347206253 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202009244284 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073316300894 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074839188535 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141587110118 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446742531576 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.