Deforestation is a natural threat to nature.in yuor opinion what should we do to eliminate it ?
deforestation plays a harmful role in modern societies.Obviously,it has a powerful influence on human beings and it s impact is often negative.Although, we might not like to admit it , deforestration has created certain unpleasant consquencies for natura.The present essay seeks to argue that the problem of deforestration is very serious and the government should take immediat actions to bring it under control. Notably,there are several serious disadvantages to deforestration .In the first place, it has an important module in enhancing of the air pollution.An example may help clarify the point.For example, in Bangladesh due to deforestration,there is a high rate of air pollution.In the second place ,deforestration is damaging people with respiratory disorders.while peaple are arguing about these debates of conflict,deforestration continue to influence every aspects of every day life such as the home,health ,education,communication, and so on. one possible solution these days is that the government should codify new rules.For one things,in forests , there is a need to more policemans to prevent from deforestration.For instance,in Amazon deforest ,a lot of policemans exist and they are responsible for deforestration.Another thing is that the government should punish the people that cause deforestration.As an illustration, in Australia , there are hard rules for doers deforestration. The second effective solution is that the government should increase the amount of planting in different regions. Firstly,doctor Smith, the head of meteorology department at Oxford university, claims that planting causes people to breathe the clean ir.For example, in Netherland largely because of a lot trees, the pure airis accessible and people enjoy from it.Secondly,the latest figures released by the world meteorology Organization ( W.M.O) reveal that about 50 percent of deforestration can compensate by new trees.In other words, new trees are a positive motive for falling the negative effecte of degorestration on public health. In the conclusion,it can be recapitulated that deforestration is a threating pronlem with devasting side effects to human life .Through careful planning,education, and coopration ,the government can fight it effeciently in order to eradicate the issue permanently.The hope is to make the world a safer place for the future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, another thing, for example, for instance, such as, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84971098266 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.09344989585 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.38836153 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.333333333 106.682146367 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.6666666667 20.7667163134 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.1666666667 7.06120827912 413% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0520026474264 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308991138536 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253035058033 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520026474264 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.76 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.1 11.3001002004 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.35 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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