Computers are increasingly used in every fields these days. Some people believe that human beings are becoming slave of computer .Do you think it is a positive or negative development.
Computers have become necessity of our life. Every work start from it and end at its final product. It has dramatically changed our social lives by saving our time , in trades and business as well as interacting globally. Despite its beneficiary aspects, it has also made us addicted towards it with number of detrimental factors such as obesity, bad posture, that will affect our life in long term. We shall look into this essay in a brief manner.
Admittedly, technological advances has been a boon to a mankind by producing these type of electronic machines. This has created a possibility to do online shopping, surfing web, searching anything in the ocean of knowledge as well as studying through interactive classes through world wide web. The large electronic boxes has created automated production resultantly decreasing manpower. Furthermore, emails , video conferencing , Microsoft softwares has taken the business to a new level.
Moving further, the main benefit is the use of this techy savy in the mega factories. Machinery does most of the work in the factories. It is like a backbone of the industries . For instance , 90 % of the work canada operate majority of their work through computers. It is worth point out that , proportion of skytrains and electric railway trains run only through hidden employes operating the work through the computers. Indeed, this modern machines has made everything to be operated by itself.
To recapitulate, perhaps it has given our society access to every single thing on a click. On the other side it has made us attracted towards it by making us to follow it and dependant on it. But we should never forget that these are human created machines and can be modified humankind anytime on its excessive use anytime. Also, it is in our hand on how to rational use of these technological equipments to keep us on right path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02243589744 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84826903079 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.348729745 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4736842105 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942883689227 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275146996566 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407221057008 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514918665054 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308339421064 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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