Many people are concerned that where, rural area or urban city, is the better place to raise their children. I believe that living in the rural area are far more benefits than living in the city and this essay will discuss on both view that why people choice to live in those two places.
On the one hand, there are several advantages that living in the countryside is essential. Firstly, Children who grew up in the rural area are stronger and healthier than others who living in the urban city. Because they have more chanced to play in the natural playground with their friend and the air quality can improve their immune system that can prevent their body from the virus attack. Secondly, there are much safer then the city because here hasn’t had much complicated of people live in this small society, therefore parents can feel more comfortable for allowing their children play with their friends outside.
On the other hand, Living in the city provided diversity of professional course that parent can choice for developing of children’s skills, such as play piano, learning language and family education. There are varieties of training courses that parent can choice for their children in order to improve children’s ability. From learning those variety skills that children will have more chances to be a successful person when they grow up. This kind of training class is difficult to find if you living in rural area.
In conclusion, although that living in the city provided variety of facilities for children to learn new skills, I believe that children should living in a natural environment of place which is good for their healthy and physical strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98581560284 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41218174973 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4807191613 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207093223646 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870668620641 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524483751679 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144688975974 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415619458935 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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