The following appeared in a memorandum written by the chairperson of the West Egg Town Council.
"Two years ago, consultants predicted that West Egg's landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, the town's residents have been recycling twice as much material as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of recycled material — which includes paper, plastic, and metal — should further increase, since charges for pickup of other household garbage will double. Furthermore, over 90 percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our town's strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Chairperson of west egg town council demands to increase the amount of recycled material such as paper, plastic and metal as charges for pickup of other household garbage will double. As according to his memorandum in past two year town’s residents has been recycling twice as much material as they did in previous year and according to survey made it is been concluded that 90 percent of people will do more recycling in feature. However, before this demand can properly evaluate, some question must be answer.
First of all, how efficient was your survey? Maybe survey which is made has done in small area with minimum number of people. However, what is the guaranty that people will not forget about survey in next three years? Maybe they will start doing what they used to do in previous year because three year is a big time to forget about small survey made for feature. Maybe population in our town will increase in coming years as it is developing area which will lead to increase in quantity in garbage. If this comes out to be true than garbage disposal land will soon get fill leading to many problems.
Secondly, what is the guaranty that people in town will continue doing twice as much material as they did in previous years? Maybe as population will increase people will forget about predication made of feeling of landfill which is used to garbage disposal will get fill. If this situation comes out to be true than amount of garbage will increase and that land may get fill within estimated time and if this happen people of West Egg Town will fall ill and some decease will born.
In conclusion, memorandum made by chairperson to West Egg Town council has some loop holes. Considering this loop holes it is difficult to consider his demand but if all the question is answered and more evidence is gather than his demand can be considered.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 326 350
No. of Characters: 1507 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.623 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.281 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.931 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ead to increase in quantity in garbage. If this comes out to be true than garbage ...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imated time and if this happen people of West Egg Town will fall ill and some dec...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'bear' or 'be born'?
Suggestion: bear; be born
...own will fall ill and some decease will born. In conclusion, memorandum made by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 326.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74539877301 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34934082478 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457055214724 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3736130482 57.8364921388 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.70786347227 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234783214512 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887530875467 0.0743258471296 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065953967931 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154787071825 0.128457276422 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338309520628 0.0628817314937 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.3550499002 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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