In some countries, criminal In some countries, criminal trials are shown to the public on television. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?trials are shown to the public on television. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Can archiving the trials of the brutal acts by the criminal’s through media brutalize their victims? As a matter of fact, more often than not it is observed by many a man that by broadcasting the criminal trials to the public will ensure the prevailing of justice for the victims. To my mind, it is doing more harm than good to the victims would affect them psychologically as the inhumane act done to be seen all around the world which would encourage both favorable and unfavorable outcomes for them.
Arguably, sealing the court records of criminal trials have not become popular in the recent times for no reason. Since the visual media would disclose the identity of the witnesses as well as the jurors, it would become impossible for the law enforcers to protect them from being poached. Moreover, owing to the statements given by the victim in the court, they are constantly judged by the viewers at each and every aspect making it difficult for them to survive in a normal world. A painstaking research has had been undertaken by the Harvard University, which revealed that 68% of the victims encountered further criminal acts after they deposed themselves in the court.
Notwithstanding the darker side, the trend certainly has some promising consequences, in-camera proceeding not only allow the transparency of the judicial system but also, eliminates the errors in the judgment which could easily be viewed and verified by the judges as an when the accused protest against his conviction into the higher court. Although it is not entirely untrue, but the impact is not that severe in the eyes of law. For instance, no sooner did a survey performed by BBC news channel, than it was unfolded that only 5% cases were overturned when the criminals preferred an appeal in the higher court due to lack of evidence which were not considered in the original court of law.
To conclude, it can be asserted that media trials are an important aspect of the contemporary era. However, the sanctity of the victim must be kept at all times when justice is being delivered, which would eventually lead to a socially stable and morally prosperous society; lest good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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Suggestion: Painstaking research
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89866666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68466724609 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562666666667 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0125374887 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.083333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947557378299 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038315251021 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036767273191 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555790522838 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032933882302 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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