These days the advancement of technology has improved significantly compared to the last decade and everyone has their style of communicating with their handphones such as calling or messaging. Personally, I think it is a great way to text rather than call. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain the following essay.
To begin with, texting gives people privacy when they are in public places. While phone calls can give them privacy as well if they are talking softly or silently, it can somehow lead to unclear understanding. But when people text, nobody can overhear your conversation which is about imperative details. I assume that a personal example can shed light on this notion. A couple of years ago when I was working in a local bank, I had to call the clients regarding the bank account issues. However, when I am outside to have my lunch, I have to answer the phone calls from the customers and tell them their bank account numbers and passwords. What I did not realize was that someone had overheard my conversation and hack into the client's bank account. After my horrible mistake, I was fired immediately from the company. As you can see, this clearly shows why I choose to text over calling.
Another reason why I choose to text is because of the reason that saves my time. In other words, it is much faster when you have to respond to a plethora of customers. With the convenience of messaging, I can just type the words in short form and send them to the people I want in a second. In fact, if you are an employee and have to talk about a long description of a product to the desired clients, you can just message them with a method call copy and paste. This takes less than 1 minute whereas a phone call will take 10 minutes. Moreover, when you are calling a customer, other people might call you at the same time which the call cannot be answered, leading to dissatisfactory with the people who are calling. But the messaging platform will enable you to multitask which can chat and receive messages at the same time.
All in all, I certainly prefer to text rather than calling because it gives me a sense of protection and provides me with flexibility in time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, while, i feel, i think, in fact, in short, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57070707071 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57039945769 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532828282828 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.571048791 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158052982183 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045895443996 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359591285625 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925143973243 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197517541529 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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