Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as pratical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Prevalently, there are several changes in this century to reach a sustainable living. Some people tend to take a journet for visiting other countries and gain an access for better education or find best cmpanies to work. Therefore, staying in the foreign country can cause serious problem in the way we are communicating, nor the pratical issues. I strongly believe with the statement and in this essay I will explain the reasons to accomodate my statement.
To begin with, local people which do not know much about the others culture like China, Japan and Korea will not accept to overseas citizen who came to their country, even foreigner speaks native language. Local people from close minded countries feel strange with the way of outsiders when they speaks and most of them misintepret the meaning. Therefore, it is hard dor travelers to adapt in those coountries.
On the other hand, for foreigners, living in other countries need to learn more about the rules , culture and the society. If people lack of knowledge about the new country,it will hard for them to adapt. For instance, Indonesian who loved to consume chilli sauce, if they moved to other countries which unprovided those sauce will had to find the appropriate restaurant or food to powerup their energy. So, it a must to research more about the country if planned to move in the next months or years.
In conclusion, to living in the other countries, we need to prepare more about the country and try ot adapt with the circumstances. This method will make you survive and reduce the chance to getting into the crucial problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...t for visiting other countries and gain an access for better education or find best cmpan...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'speak'
Suggestion: speak
...nge with the way of outsiders when they speaks and most of them misintepret the meanin...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tries need to learn more about the rules , culture and the society. If people lack...
^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... lack of knowledge about the new country,it will hard for them to adapt. For instan...
^^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...tries which unprovided those sauce will had to find the appropriate restaurant or f...
^^^
Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... food to powerup their energy. So, it a must to research more about the country if plan...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ot) must be used with a third-person verb: 'adapts'.
Suggestion: adapts
...epare more about the country and try ot adapt with the circumstances. This method wil...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91544117647 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58591455226 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3010857768 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.846153846 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188844809993 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645353118654 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646307157758 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115855059426 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604528230727 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.