It is utterly an indisputabe fact that having perosperos country is entail to having a great leaders, which have been always play a pivotal role in the world' development. In fact there are not much more successful leader which were educated in the world that had unprecidented success. In this regard, some people belive that leadership comes naturaly and no educated need to support this skils. However, others disagree. I totaly agree with the former view. I feel this way for two resones which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, It goes without saying that becoming a successful manager directly correleted with hard working. there is a truly peremis that says leader should have different natural skiles. such as responsibilities, hard working, having stronge inducing, which noneof them are educatable. In terms of teaching there are just some technic which is educatable others subject that mentioned former is not teachable. There is delightful result in one research experiment which shows the number of prospective and prorperous MBA students in one universities with high natural and intensive motivation are far more than the number of ordinery student in that university. This results explicitly indicates that having natural sens of leadership is more influence than learning just the technic of managment in universit.
Second, there is a strong fact that leading a group is among the hard job position which shows that leaders should work more than other and work hard. when you dont have enough motivation to control and execute a specifice duties, you wont be a seccess leaders. One of my own experienc is a good case in point. I was working as an executive director in a big company and I have always hade a sense of managing. during the time of my careas I found an inner driven sense of managment in my selfe which helps me to become a ceo at the next stage of my profetionl life. thanks to my determination sense and high instigation sense to being leader. I kew that If I hadn't work hard and couldnt realize my interest in this field I would never have become a ceo at a big company.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that natural sens of leadership is more important to become a delighted leaders. It is not only needs a high sense of motivation but needs a hard working which both of them are not achievable by studing and educating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82598039216 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71816156569 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524509803922 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6562284957 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7619047619 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129694050241 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415565904725 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401874415917 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795882540851 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183873658147 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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